Audience Feedback

All my audience feedback was positive which makes it harder for me to develop my idea as I haven't got any criticism to bounce back off. However, I have summarised the audience feedback I did get...

I also got some more audience feedback off a member of my media class who wasn't present when I presented my pitch of my initial ideas. They suggested that I include close ups in-between my titles to give the audience more clues. I am going to carry this forward.