Summary

• TITLES DON'T STAND OUT

Some say my titles stand out and that they are good. However, some people think the titles don't stand out and that they need to be made bigger. When I first added titles to my sequence they were smaller than they are now, then I decided to make them bigger as my media teacher told me they were too small, therefore I am not going to change my titles, despite my audience feedback.

• FLASHBACK IS TOO LONG

One of my concerns was that the flashback was too long, as typically, flashback's are a lot shorter. I had feedback that said the same. I asked my media class if it would strengthen my product if I made the scene shorter however they disagreed, therefore I am not going to change it.

• SHOTS NEED TO BE MORE STEADY IN THE CAR

I disagree with this feedback. Previous feedback has told me that my cinematography skills are good, and that the variation of angles and shots in that scene work really well. I am going to ignore this feedback as I think that the scene in the car is the most professional looking part of my product.

• PURPLE FLASH NOT NEEDED

I did try taking off the purple flash during the feedback, however I think it works better when the effect is included. I did take a red effect off earlier on in the contraction stages of my product as I had feedback saying it was 'too much'. I am going to keep all my effects I have included in the flashback scene as it emphasises the flashback and male characters state of mind and also contrasts with the previous scene.

• FELT LIKE A TV DRAMA

I do not agree that my product looks like a TV  drama opening sequence and even if it does I am unsure what I could do about this as I think it would mean having to change a lot of aspects such as the filming, editing, sounds, titles, characters, costumes and even the narrative.