I have improved my opening sequence from my first cut by:
- Adding diegetic sound of ambience in the first and forth scene
- Adding screaming of the girl while she is being attacked as well as grunts
- Adding diegetic heavy breathing in the first scene, this also adds as a sound bridge to the next scene which improves the continuity of my product
- Adding the title 'ENIGMA PRODUCTION PRESENTS', which also acts as a bridge to the next scene
- Choosing to cut the diegetic sounds of the ambience and breathing when the male character shuts his car door - I think this is effective due to the shot I chose to use earlier on, demonstrated in the post 'Decisions' as it emphasises that the character is 'shutting out' the real world
- Adding titles, however they were too small and I needed to bring them into the frame more
- Adding the sound of the engine to cover up the silences between cutting the voice-over which improved my continuity of sound
- Adding effects to the flashback/scene three
- Taking out the shot of the car after scene three
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